Mini #4

[TheMasses]

This is my first attempt at painting shiny black clothing (think Matrix chick,) I’d appreciate any feedback I can get. :)

http://crunch-waflle.netfirms.com/pictures/beatrice.jpg

http://crunch-waflle.netfirms.com/pictures/beatrice_back.jpg

Thanks.

[Nathan Caroland]

Not a fan of this particular miniature (liked her concept art so much more I have to admit) but, that being said, not bad at all!

Maybe a bit rough, perhaps a wash of black to maybe bring things in a bit, but I'm not sure. I know I can't pull it off, so take my advice with just a pinch of skeptism.

[vincegamer]

Funny, I really like the mini.
Maybe cause I've never seen the concept art.

I suggest you make the highlights smaller and put an edge of pure white on them.
Otherwise nicely done. Very good cloak.

[Jubilee]

Your white highlights to get the shine are too thick. You really only want a sliver of white at the high point for the vinyl-like shine. You want more dark gray and black.

I really dislike this miniature, I just can't get over how much different from her concept art she is. It was a real letdown. That said, your paint job really improves it. ;)

/ali

[TheMasses]

It seems the general response is that the highlights need to be sharper and brighter. :banghead:




FF, Jubilee – I think that the mini on its own is pretty good. However when viewed in the context of the concept art it is a bet of a let down. :dontknow: There is some talk of having another version of her, kind of the way Reaper has many different Sophie’s, but if it happens it will be a little way down the road.